LOVE AGAINST THE ODDS
(A Flash Fiction Challenge)
Labored breathing and the machine’s hum breaks the
silence. Breath for breath his
matches hers as fingers entwine.
Lifetime of memories dance about the room; first kisses, that first
secret touch, and a promise to love forever. Then comes doubt, a misunderstanding and room for regret to
linger between the then and now.
Years later, a chance meeting and a love reborn. Now he wonders how he will live without
her. Can he live without her? Breath for breath he matches hers,
brushing hair from her eyes and breathes in her scent as he sits wrapped in her
love.
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Peter de Vries, you read my mind!
ReplyDeleteLol, Janet...too funny! I enjoy it all...even the rejections. Here's to the challenge of being a writer...may it never end!
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Wasn't it Peter deVries who also said something like, I can't write without inspiration so I make sure I'm inspired every morning at 9 AM? :) Great flash fiction!
ReplyDeleteHi Susanna! I'm not sure about the other possible de Vries comment, but it still sounds like a good one! That was my first attempt at a flash fiction contest I did earlier this year. I thought it was pretty good myself but it didn't win. Good writing exercise though...at least now I know I can DO flash fiction...lol...
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I love my deformed idiot :)
ReplyDeleteHi JP! That comment is actually my favorite and it made me laugh when I first read it. ;0)
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I love the Peter de Vries quote! I love your paragraph too! :)
ReplyDeleteHi Erik! I'm glad you like the quote and thank you for your kind words about my flash fiction piece...
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