It's time once again for WRITERLY WISDOM where every Wednesdays we will sneak a peek into the world of writing and publication. I am just beginning to learn more about my next author, Richa Jha, but I am already a huge fan! You can connect with Richa through her website (www.snugglewithpicturebooks.com), or drop her an email (richajha.jha@gmail.com). Take it away, Richa...
What’s Wine Got to Do with It!
By Richa Jha
Our writings make fascinating journeys. Sometimes, the
transformation from how they began to what they end up could be as stark as an
awkward frogling metamorphosing into a preened capuchin! I see this journey as
a sum of parts, where each phase is crucial to getting a finely sculpted piece
of work out there.
The Pitcher Plant (or the good ol’ notepad phase): Have you
observed the effortlessness with which a Pitcher Plant traps its prey? It’s a
quick, snappy, and decisive movement, regardless of the type of insect that
lands on its outer lobes. Moreover, the plant doesn’t go looking for its prey;
it is they who come to it. That’s how I see the mind of a writer operating, be
it when writing an article for a magazine, a short story, a picture book or a
novel. Ideas rarely come to you when you go looking too hard; if they do, they
feel contrived, or lacking in freshness and spontaneity. But they do strike
you, unannounced, if you keep your senses open to the possibility of ideas.
Generating them is more of a sensory exercise – a smell triggers a chain of
thought, a sound shouts out more than you can hear, a sight brings back
memories and reflections, or a story or a conversation throws open the fifty
other ways to reframe that thought. Ideas are everywhere, as long as we keep
our tentacles upped! You see a possibility, just seize it, grab it, trap it.
Never mind that you may not need it now, or ever, but make it yours before it
slips away.
And that’s where a trusty notepad comes in handy (or should
I say it is an imperative?) But I have learnt it the hard way that it’s never
been with me when I’ve needed it for the teeny weeny fraction of a second when
for example, the first little rascal said something to the second little rascal.
By the time I got to the tools of the trade, the moment had passed, the muse
had decided to disperse and the words lay forgotten.
What does stick with me like my shadow, however, is my smart
phone, which I have now begun putting to good use. I type out these sudden
bursts of inspiration into my email (that is, compose an email to myself) –
sometimes key words or ideas, or sometimes the first flow of sentences that
come to mind. There have been times when I have even typed out a full first
draft on them while waiting at my kids’ soccer lesson or the doctor’s lounge or
wherever. Once home, I just need to cut and paste this matter from my email
onto my laptop, and there, one part of my work is already done!
The Cauldron (or the hard work phase): The first part is
always the easiest, of course. But once all kinds of fuzzy, inchoate, bizarre,
outlandish, nutty or earth shattering ideas have been trapped into my system,
comes the part where I let them gestate. Or slow cook. That’s why I call it my
cauldron phase. This is where those thoughts brew and stew, and I let them be
because I know they are not ready yet to be shaped into a ripe story. Or, if I
am reasonably sure about a beginning, I start writing them down, without
suppressing any of the strains of thoughts that the one main idea sprouts. And
then I write like a maniac!
For me typically, this could last anywhere between a couple
of months to a year for fiction (much less for literary pieces and magazine
articles, though). It’s an interesting phase, because at any given time, there
are at least five different story ideas that are cooking up in my mind, each
teasing and tearing me in fifty different directions! I have found that I am at
my most irritable, scatter-brained and snappiest worst when my mind’s a boiling
cauldron. Which is pretty much all the time :)
Wine Barrel (or the grind ending-mill phase): Any writing
needs time and space to grow, to mature. Care for unaged wine, any one?
A hurriedly written story will fail the test of time because
the author will not have given adequate thought to the several possible ways in
which the story could lead to its best possible resolution. By far the most
important (and difficult) part of a picture book’s journey, for instance,
happens in this phase. When I have written out several drafts of a story (I
average at 20), I (invariably) get stuck with the ending of my best draft.
Also, as an editor, I have found that most picture books that begin with a
flourish and oodles of potential peter out into a flat whimper by the end.
There is a difference in the way churning happens in the
cauldron and inside the wine barrel. Unlike in the cauldron where your mind is
open to infinite possibilities of which way the characters can move, talk,
behave, act, or fail and then succeed, by the time your story has been locked
inside the barrel, its contents are sealed, the ingredients are already decided
and pre-mixed - right down to pinning your character to the meanest possible
problem. You are then left with the unenviable challenge of getting the best
resolution of the crisis for that particular character. That’s how wine ages
too. And that comes only with time.
Let the conflict play on in your mind for days, months, even
years, until you feel you’ve hit upon the best twist you can give to your
story’s end. If it means going right back to tweak the beginning, do so. You’ll
feel it in your gut the moment all the pieces of the jigsaw fit it perfectly!
Kudos! Make way for the wine taster now, please!
It’s hardly a smooth sail, this writing journey. But easy
treks, much like the low hanging fruits, are never half as fulfilling as one
that has weathered you inside out. By the end of any piece of writing, if you
feel you have grown and gained, you’ve got a winner in your hand. And it’s
worth every bit of those sleepless star-gazing nights during the adventure
trail.
Richa Jha is a writer based out of Lagos, Nigeria.
She is the author of a picture book and editor of an anthology of short stories. Two of her picture books are slated for release later this year in India. When not stirring the stew in the cauldron, she can be found snuggled with picture books or talking about them at http://snugglewithpicturebooks.com/ and http://www.facebook.com/snugglewithpicturebooks
Nice post, Richa. I agree that hunting for ideas isn't as good as being open and aware and allowing the ideas to find me. Thanks, Donna and Richa!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tina! Glad you liked the post :)
DeleteHi Tina! Most of my ideas come to me in my dreams so I definitely have to be aware when my muse is whispering to me...;~)
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Great post! I too have been slipping my phone in my pocket and leaving it on my nightstand. I usually use the recording device because I'm either in the dark, when I wake up at night with an idea, or don't have my glasses with me when I'm 'struck' while working outside. It sure makes it easier to hang on to those little idea seeds!
ReplyDeleteYou're right Donna, that's one thing I need to start getting used to now - recording the thoughts and ideas - because the best of the ideas come to me in the middle of the night :)
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Hi Donna and welcome to my blog! I keep my phone by my bed, a tablet in my purse, and chant to myself if I need to until I get near paper and pen...lol...
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A big thanks to you, Donna for having me over for Writerly Wisdom. It's an honour, indeed :)
ReplyDeleteAs I've mentioned before, it is I who is honored to have so many talented authors and writers sharing their words of wisdom. It is incredible the things I have learned by reading these posts! Thank YOU, Richa, for being a part of this series!
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Richa -- this is wonderful. The way you have detailed the process and the images you have used are spot on, and so insightful and helpful. Thank you! I have been seen in malls or coffee shops frantically writing picture book ideas or even drafts in the notes on my iPhone -- somehow I'm much more likely to do that than I ever was to write the notes in a notebook, even when I had one with me!
ReplyDeleteYay! I'm not the only one then :-) Thanks, Beth!
DeleteHi Beth! Since I began taking my writing more seriously, I find I am even more aware of my surroundings. I now tend to pick up on moments and fragments of conversations which spark story ideas that never happened before. Oh, what a wonderful world we live in...;~)
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Love your analogies, Richa - very apt! And so true - very important to have that notebook (or something) handy to catch ideas, and I wish there was a way to hurry that slow-cooking cauldron phase along, but you really just can't! It's done when it's done :) Thanks for a great post!
ReplyDeleteHi Susanna! "It's done when it's done." I like it and so true! :~)
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Dear Susanna, coming from you, those words sounds even from delightful to me :) Thanks so so much!
DeleteI love this post. So true about capturing those ideas - even the ones that make you say, "I don't need to write this down. It's so brilliant, I can NEVER forget it!" Those are the ones that disappear without a trace. I am never more than 2 feet away from my phone, so that's where my idea list lives.
ReplyDeleteHi Genevieve! I'm a huge fan of post it notes, napkins, and itty bitty bits of paper..THAT'S where MY ideas live...lol...
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Gosh, I know those 'I can NEVER forget it' ones. You're so right - those are the ones that vanish swoosh before we've realised it :) And yes, Donna, my handbag too has those itty bitty bits of scrap. Sometimes, it takes me a while to figure out the scribbled words!
DeleteRicha,
ReplyDeleteThanks for a great post. I definitely use my iPhone the same way. I, also, use a voice recorder for when I am driving and have ideas. I have had lines disappear without a trace and it's so frustrating...but having a convenient way to "keep" them helps a lot! Your analogies are meaningfulness.
Thanks again for this series, Donna!
Hi Penny! My biggest challenge is that a lot of my ideas come from my dreams and trying to remember all the bits and pieces of a dream when I first wake up is tough...even with my phone next to me and paper/pen in the next room...;~)
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Hi Penny, getting used to the voice recorder is something I must will myself to do now pronto! Both Donna and you have mentioned that it works for you, so I'm sure it mustn't be as awkward to do as it appears to me now :) Thanks again, Penny, for stopping by and leaving your comment...
DeleteWhat a wonderful blog post, Richa (is that pronounced Ree-ka?) Many of my ideas simmer for years, others come bursting forth but then spend years in re-writes and edits and proofreading. No story or poem or novel can be a quick delivery. And even after I think a piece is done, I leave it simmer a little longer and look at it again, with fresh eyes.
ReplyDeleteHi Karen! I have stories and partial stories and even just bits of a story in a file in my office. One of these days I will go back to them and see what I can make of them.
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Dear Karen, it's RICH-a ('ch' as in chair) :)
DeleteYou're so right about leaving a piece to simmer a little longer than what we think is the final form. Thanks for stopping by and reading through my post!