Sunday, July 15, 2012

This & That




LOVE AGAINST THE ODDS
(A Flash Fiction Challenge)

Labored breathing and the machine’s hum breaks the silence.  Breath for breath his matches hers as fingers entwine.  Lifetime of memories dance about the room; first kisses, that first secret touch, and a promise to love forever.  Then comes doubt, a misunderstanding and room for regret to linger between the then and now.  Years later, a chance meeting and a love reborn.  Now he wonders how he will live without her.  Can he live without her?  Breath for breath he matches hers, brushing hair from her eyes and breathes in her scent as he sits wrapped in her love. 

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There is no mistaking the dismay on the face of a writer who has just heard that his brain child is a deformed idiot.  - L. Sprague de Camp

I love being a writer. What I can't stand is the paperwork.  -Peter de Vries

Make everybody fall out of the plane first, and then explain who they were and why they were in the plane to begin with. - Nancy Ann Dibble

If it has horses and swords in it, it's a fantasy, unless it also has a rocketship in it, in which case it becomes science fiction. The only thing that'll turn a story with a rocketship in it back into fantasy is the Holy Grail. - Debra Doyle

If you start with a bang, you won't end with a whimper. - T. S. Eliot

8 comments:

  1. Peter de Vries, you read my mind!

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    1. Lol, Janet...too funny! I enjoy it all...even the rejections. Here's to the challenge of being a writer...may it never end!

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  2. Wasn't it Peter deVries who also said something like, I can't write without inspiration so I make sure I'm inspired every morning at 9 AM? :) Great flash fiction!

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    1. Hi Susanna! I'm not sure about the other possible de Vries comment, but it still sounds like a good one! That was my first attempt at a flash fiction contest I did earlier this year. I thought it was pretty good myself but it didn't win. Good writing exercise though...at least now I know I can DO flash fiction...lol...

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  3. I love my deformed idiot :)

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    1. Hi JP! That comment is actually my favorite and it made me laugh when I first read it. ;0)

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  4. I love the Peter de Vries quote! I love your paragraph too! :)

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    1. Hi Erik! I'm glad you like the quote and thank you for your kind words about my flash fiction piece...

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