tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7382427031631027145.post2472015853368351178..comments2023-07-10T05:40:25.044-04:00Comments on Donna L Martin's THE STORY CATCHER: Flash Fiction FridayThink Positive, Be Positivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03981805086599633473noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7382427031631027145.post-14176550463812828132013-09-12T22:42:35.029-04:002013-09-12T22:42:35.029-04:00Hi Gladys! I like how you brought the story full c...Hi Gladys! I like how you brought the story full circle...good job!<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by and come back any time!Donna L Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553676457762998807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7382427031631027145.post-55142625794310071002013-09-12T18:06:01.487-04:002013-09-12T18:06:01.487-04:00Mary looked at him. "I honestly don't kn...Mary looked at him. "I honestly don't know. I want to go home but am not sure where home is any more."<br />"Lady," the driver said. "My shift is almost over, if you have no place to go maybe I can take you home with me. My wife can give you a meal and a bed for the night. Tomorrow you can decide where it is you want to go."<br />"Oh thank you." Mary looked relieved that she didn't have to make a decision right now. The driver had made it for her.<br />The driver turned off his meter and call in that he was off shift and on his way home. <br />When they got to his house he took Mary in and called his wife. "Dear, I'm home and I brought the new nanny, you wanted."<br />Mary was surprised but happy. She had a home and a family again. She would do her best to make this family hers.Gladyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11481648901995174143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7382427031631027145.post-19900340042625872412013-09-08T00:05:54.575-04:002013-09-08T00:05:54.575-04:00Hi Erik! Nice addition to this story. I like how ...Hi Erik! Nice addition to this story. I like how you are not afraid to jump right in there and take Mary on another journey...;~)<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by and come back any time!Donna L Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17553676457762998807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7382427031631027145.post-90049492036944477432013-09-06T16:35:46.864-04:002013-09-06T16:35:46.864-04:00'Should I? No, I shouldn't. No, I SHOULD!&...'Should I? No, I shouldn't. No, I SHOULD!' Mary made up her mind, "Green Lane, Pennsylvania, sir. I know it's out of your range, being in Phillie, but if you could drive me as far as you can towards it... Please?"<br />...<br />Half an hour later, Mary arrived in a small house on a dead-end street. It was exactly as she remembered it, though the grass was a bit long. She'd have to get the Fratz family to help her... But it was still hers. Hers and Joe's. Their home.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com